diff --git a/source/About/index.md b/source/About/index.md
index 426e113..ac87b90 100644
--- a/source/About/index.md
+++ b/source/About/index.md
@@ -6,46 +6,45 @@ date: 2023-05-17 20:35:10
-Hi!
-
Hi there!
-I'm Tim, a young student from Austria with an insatiable passion for programming. But that's not all—I'm also enthusiastic about many other topics that I love to share and discuss.
+I'm Tim, a young student from Austria with a passion for programming. But coding isn't my only interest. I'm also into a bunch of other topics that I love to explore and discuss.
-Since describing myself with sentences can be tricky, let's break it down with some code:
+Instead of just talking about myself, here's a quick overview in code form:
{% codeblock lang:cs %}
-var tK = new Person("Tim","Kicker");
+var tK = new Person("Tim", "Kicker");
-tK.State = "Austria";
+tK.Country = "Austria";
tK.Interests = {"Linux",
"Selfhosting",
"Vinyl",
"Data curation",
- "Privacy Guardance"};
+ "Privacy Protection"};
-tK.FavGames = {"Half-Life 2",
- "Lego Universe",
- "Far Cry 3",
- "Portal 2"};
+tK.FavoriteGames = {"Half-Life 2",
+ "Lego Universe",
+ "Far Cry 3",
+ "Portal 2"};
-tK.FavLang = "CSharp";
-tK.FavColor = Color.Black;
- // if that's a real color?
+tK.FavoriteLanguages = {"C#","Rust","Haskell"};
+tK.FavoriteColor = Color.Black;
+// Does this count as a real color?
{% endcodeblock %}
-I've answered some common questions on my [FAQ page](https://tim.kicker.dev/faq/). If you prefer to read my content without JavaScript, check out the [**alternate frontend**](https://blog.kicker.dev).
+I've answered some common questions on my [FAQ page](https://tim.kicker.dev/faq/). If you'd prefer to browse my content without JavaScript, check out the alternate frontend.
-Feel like supporting me? [Buy me a coffee!](https://www.buymeacoffee.com/timkicker)
+Want to support me? [Buy me a coffee!](https://www.buymeacoffee.com/timkicker)
-Don't hesitate to reach out—I'd love to hear from you! Leave a comment, send an email, or connect with me on Twitter or GitHub.
+Feel free to get in touch anytime. Leave a comment, drop an email, or connect with me on socials. I'd love to hear from you!
Happy browsing!
Tim
c:
+