diff --git a/source/About/index.md b/source/About/index.md
index 426e113..ac87b90 100644
--- a/source/About/index.md
+++ b/source/About/index.md
@@ -6,46 +6,45 @@ date: 2023-05-17 20:35:10
   <img src="https://avatars.githubusercontent.com/u/33966128?v=4" alt="apictureofme" width="150" height="150" style="border-radius: 50%;"  />
 </div>
 
-Hi! 
-
 Hi there!
 
-I'm Tim, a young student from Austria with an insatiable passion for programming. But that's not all—I'm also enthusiastic about many other topics that I love to share and discuss.
+I'm Tim, a young student from Austria with a passion for programming. But coding isn't my only interest. I'm also into a bunch of other topics that I love to explore and discuss.
 
-Since describing myself with sentences can be tricky, let's break it down with some code:
+Instead of just talking about myself, here's a quick overview in code form:
 
 {% codeblock lang:cs %}
-var tK = new Person("Tim","Kicker");
+var tK = new Person("Tim", "Kicker");
 
-tK.State = "Austria";
+tK.Country = "Austria";
 tK.Interests = {"Linux",
                 "Selfhosting",
                 "Vinyl",
                 "Data curation",
-                "Privacy Guardance"};
+                "Privacy Protection"};
 
-tK.FavGames = {"Half-Life 2",
-               "Lego Universe",
-               "Far Cry 3",
-               "Portal 2"};
+tK.FavoriteGames = {"Half-Life 2",
+                    "Lego Universe",
+                    "Far Cry 3",
+                    "Portal 2"};
 
-tK.FavLang = "CSharp";
-tK.FavColor = Color.Black; 
-            // if that's a real color?
+tK.FavoriteLanguages = {"C#","Rust","Haskell"};
+tK.FavoriteColor = Color.Black;
+// Does this count as a real color?
 
 {% endcodeblock %}
 
-I've answered some common questions on my [FAQ page](https://tim.kicker.dev/faq/). If you prefer to read my content without JavaScript, check out the [**alternate frontend**](https://blog.kicker.dev).
+I've answered some common questions on my [FAQ page](https://tim.kicker.dev/faq/). If you'd prefer to browse my content without JavaScript, check out the alternate frontend.
 
-Feel like supporting me? [Buy me a coffee!](https://www.buymeacoffee.com/timkicker)
+Want to support me? [Buy me a coffee!](https://www.buymeacoffee.com/timkicker)
 
-Don't hesitate to reach out—I'd love to hear from you! Leave a comment, send an email, or connect with me on Twitter or GitHub.
+Feel free to get in touch anytime. Leave a comment, drop an email, or connect with me on socials. I'd love to hear from you!
 
 Happy browsing!
 
 Tim
 c:
 
+
 <p align="center">
   <img src="https://raw.githubusercontent.com/botchGNU/botchGNU/master/generated/languages.svg" />
 </p>